i now look at the sky and say
that i'll surely live another day
to tell my story and show the world
that there once lived a person with my name
who wished god that he could stay
a second more and breathe some air
he just hoped that he could live
to express his love inside hard to give
unfortunately for him he loved someone
not like others who love for fun
he felt bad that he couldnt share
his life with that girl, which's not fair
above all he wanted to breathe
a second more which felt so free
suprisingly for everyone he found amile
in that grief which always stood by
he faced the truth with a hope
that she'll be his SOME OTHER DAY
everyone has got to have there last minutes in this world and join the under world i am writing a peom at school about life and death and i will be putting it on here once i have finished it :) nice peom keep up the good work xx kimberley xx
very sad this is like that movie 'Lovestory' ++++10 regards anjali
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Lovely..strong emotions flowing through........ After the great grief..there's still someone else around... Great poem..very nice concept...