Time is flowing
Like a wagon moving
Flowers are falling
With a race, perishing
Faces are fading
Of the stars mourning
Trees are falling
When the birds singing
Man alone standing
With a greed never ending
Time is flowing......
When..., only the man existing.
06-12-2011
liked your sense of flow. keep growing.10 lots of love. abhimanyu kumar.s
As the saying goes TIME IS GOLD. A beautiful poem to remind us that time is fleeting as the natue and the humankind. Never regret the fleeting time used in writing such a tasteful poem....Thanks for sharing.
Yes, time goes by really fast and we should focus more on the important things of our lives such as love, nature instead of material ones. A great idea for a poem!
i love this one, short and thoughtful! keep it up. good luck and thanks for sharing it again :)
kon kehta he k haalaat badal jaen gey waqt guzray ga tou hum sath guzar jaen gey...i think man standing alone, or apart is an illusion...man is not a separate being but the passing time casts it's effect on him indeed!
ur poems r gr8..u pot in them all kind of ideeas..love..nature..thinkings..is nice and full of soul some of them..but u must work litlle on ur englesh.r some mistakes were u can`t understand the meeneng of the word in that moment..i hope u not mad at me..i just sayng.and i cordiallly invite u to read my poems too and comment..pls.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
time lost will never be taken back so better be good and not greedy your idea speaks the truth