Save The World Poem by cherassery damodaran binish

Save The World

Rating: 5.0


Centuries passed, but it survived
As a canopy for all those who lived
Surprised by the wind and the rain
And helped the living to remain.

'Survival of the fittest', the guiding law
And the plans to destroy every foe
But for those doings, there was a reason
And without a reason, there was no season.

But, when days passed, it seemed vague
And pretends to be civilized, but a rogue
And for this nature, what is the future?
For all those wounds, how to suture?

So, keep in mind, the next generation
And lit the candles for a new revolution.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 13 January 2012

A wonderful poem, a fantastic write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Human Right.

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Deborah Russell 14 January 2012

A nice poem with a great ending.

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Ramesh Rai 14 January 2012

So, keep in mind, the next generation And lit the candles for a new revolution.

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 14 January 2012

As I say, only those dies, who cannot go with the world anymore, so let us go on and face our life, learn, get wisdom, and then we find true happiness forever. Lovely poem of hope.

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Kislaya Gopal 15 January 2012

A wonderful poem of hope and a message, that still time remains to mend our ways!

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Kemi Kemms 11 September 2012

I have in mind to write a poem concerning this problem but i still haven't written it. I believe I could never present it as marvelous as you did here! 10+++

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Eindaray Kyaw 31 August 2012

So, keep in mind, the next generation And lit the candles for a new revolution. This verse can make me appreciate you! !

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 05 March 2012

wonderful poem: rhyme and meaning everything is in a harmony, bravo.

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Wahab Abdul 10 February 2012

NICE, VERY NICE, I LIKE THE POEM, NO, I SHOULD SAY I LOVE THE POEM, REALLY IT IS A GOOD POEM.THE POEM DESERVES 100/100.PLEASE READ MY POEMS.

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Silverinna Annastasia 05 February 2012

Wonderful. Moving. A wonderful poem.

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