Time's Whisper Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Time's Whisper

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Awake this is important for all,
Do not sleep oh soul do not fall.
Stand and hear God's song soon,
Sun has to come, goes far moon.

Stars are going to do meditation,
They will achieve sure perfection.
Everywhere pure air you do find,
Awake soon! With God you bind.

Kindness is the theme of mother,
Nature is with a new veil further.
She will take in to her lap to grace,
Awake oh soul do run to win race.

Face you do wash with fresh water,
See soon there prays little daughter.
Learn values and earn virtues soon,
In freshness of morning do get boon.

Awake oh dear soul you see again,
Monsoon has come near to do rain.
Pain you do wash of all past actions,
Surrender in God after all reactions.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,6 June 2015. All rights reserved.

Monday, December 5, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,nature,spiritual,time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 05 December 2016

picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xwell conceived and delivered to the reader! Great work! 7 Jun 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply picture of Drake Banner xPain you do wash all past action Surrender in god after all reaction That's is true art beautiful! 7 Jun 2015 by Drake Banner | Reply picture of robyn selters xWhat a lovely thought: 'stars are going to do meditation; ' a beautiful, gentle and thoughtful piece 8 Jun 2015 by robyn selters | Reply picture of Jane Taylor Hardy xI love your writing so full of wisdom and imagery that dances....thank you for sharing your gift! 28 Jul 2015 by Jane Taylor Hardy | Reply

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Caulfield Kurt 25 October 2020

Time is giving nice whisper. We are feeling its power. The beauty is encouraged and mercy is realized.

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Hazel Durham 31 March 2019

Love the title and this beautiful write is uplifting and a spiritual enlightenment to embrace the world with pure goodness and love!

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Valsa George 15 November 2018

Kindness is the theme of mother, Nature is with a new veil further. She will take in to her lap to grace, Awake oh soul do run to win race................. the ever flipping screen makes it so difficult to comment! Another great poem exhorting everyone to leave lethargy and rise into action!

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Gladys Brown Prince 10 December 2016

Awake of soul do run to win race, Surrender to God, for He can work miracle, In His hands all is possible.

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 December 2016

The times of our lives on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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