If to someone
Your love
Impart...,
Time to leave
Don’t start!
The innocent gaze
Of your eyes
Softly ties
Words of byes
Of my icy stare
Icy hand
Don’t feel uneasy
No demand
Your will
Might break
Soon or late
The tale of life
Love and hate
Though we live
In a world
Depart
Your bloom
Won’t fade
In my heart
(2009/11/17)
Than sad, so especially sweetly - a song of nightingale...10.... Tsira
Dear friend, Amir.... Spring has gone long ago and the other hasn`t come yet, but u`ve already shared with us ur fresh spring notes of poetry. i thank u for the invitation, u know i share the same taste in poetry with u,10+
A very lovely poem... What could determine a time to leave if love is shared? If Love is here, the profound feelings it created can only last forever, in some way, as what has been share still is and will always be lively in our deepest heart. 10
Catrina Heart ~Merry Xmas & A Happy New Year~ (11/17/2009 10: 14: 00 AM) wonderful poem shared here.........well done! ! !
Ency Bearis (11/17/2009 7: 52: 00 AM) If we live in a world Depart Your bloom won't fade in my heart a realistic and true of the last stanza....nice poem all through so meaningful....10
You sing like your namesake, the nightingale. A beautiful testimony to love's enduring ways. Always your friend, Sandra
Interesting poem... 'If to someone your love impart..., time to leave Don't start Love belongs to each individual to share and delight in. Thus both the the giver and receiver should feel love's bliss, together is fine or separate is fine, for your love belongs to you, as my love belongs to me. I just share it with whom ever wishes to share in it with me. A good write and a 10+++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i enjoyed this poem.. of coming and goings.. each night imparts to day...again....iip thank you..