To Feel You In Every Pulse Poem by Valsa George

To Feel You In Every Pulse

Rating: 4.9


I long to be in your endearing presence
To drown all my anguish and anxiety
In the irresistible lure of your magnetism
And to be pulled closer to you by love's gravity

I seek to be in your comforting nearness
To feel you in every breath and pulse
To peer into the brambles of your dark eyes
And cover them with my palms on an impulse

I want to be within the radius of your proximity
To make you feel how feelings of passion gyrate
As the whirl of a current in the depths of my heart
That waits to overflow like a river in spate

I crave to be lost in your mesmerizing charm
To taste and feel the fragrance of love
My body warmly snuggled close to you
Like a crooning, brooding, love-bitten dove

Now soak me in the liquid passion of your heart
That impels my spirit to scale new heights
Turn my heart into an opening blossom of joy
And rock me in happy swings in love's delights

To Feel You In Every Pulse
Thursday, June 4, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: intimacy,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 04 June 2020

Very interesting love poem. Each stanza is a gem and makes one think about him/her lover. Enjoyed very much.

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Vaibhav Simha 05 June 2020

This is so passionately written! Expressions like " a river in spate" and " brambles of your dark eyes" elevate the poeticism entailed in this piece, though I'd like to confirm if " brambles" herein refer to the iris or the dark furcations (not the dental term) that sometimes canvas the white part of the eye.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 05 June 2020

True feelings of ecstatic love expressed in beautiful lines. Thank you for sharing a lovely poem.

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To drown inn the irresistible lure of your magnetism, To peer into the brambles of your dark eyes, my heart That waits to overflow like a river in spate, My body warmly snuggled close to you Like a crooning, brooding, love-bitten dove rock me in happy swings in love's delights. Beautiful lines that will remain in the cradle of poetical delight...10

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Khairul Ahsan 06 June 2020

A passionate poem on love and intimacy. I am sure the words will resonate in many a ear. Every line of the poem is an ardent expression of pulsating love that throbs the heart.10/10.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 25 July 2020

" Turn my heart into an opening blossom of joy" Love turns into an opening blossom. Beautifully described. Thank you.

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Savita Tyagi 16 June 2020

beautiful and intense expressions of love and passion. When the deepest emotions of love rise one feels it in each and every breath. May you always be blessed with this pure ecestacy of love.

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Glen Kappy 11 June 2020

hey, valsa! i've been meaning to visit with your poems and am finally getting round to it. this one is charming and well-written. i hestitated at " brambles of your dark eyes" i suppose because here in the u.s. brambles usually have a negative connotation. but then i thought, ah, yes, one gets caught in, stays in the brambles. good stuff! -glen

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Ravi Kopra 07 June 2020

main teri pyaari chaal-dhaal main rehna chahti hoon apnay dukh dard mitaanay k liyay, teray mohan k akarshan main aa kar kheenchi aati hoon mohabbat ki kashish main

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 June 2020

An excellent poem of love that holds us spellbound. Deeply passionate and heartwarming. Each and every stanza vividly portrays the kind of love that we so envisioned to have in life. Beautifully written with great rhyme and compelling imagery. Onto my Poem List.

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