poet Valsa George

Valsa George

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To Feel You In Every Pulse

I long to be in your endearing presence
To drown all my anguish and anxiety
In the irresistible lure of your magnetism
And to be pulled closer to you by love's gravity

I seek to be in your comforting nearness
To feel you in every breath and pulse
To peer into the brambles of your dark eyes
And cover them with my palms on an impulse

I want to be within the radius of your proximity
To make you feel how feelings of passion gyrate
As the whirl of a current in the depths of my heart
That waits to overflow like a river in spate

I crave to be lost in your mesmerizing charm
To taste and feel the fragrance of love
My body warmly snuggled close to you
Like a crooning, brooding, love-bitten dove

Now soak me in the liquid passion of your heart
That impels my spirit to scale new heights
Turn my heart into an opening blossom of joy
And rock me in happy swings in love's delights

Topic(s) of this poem: intimacy, love

Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 4, 2020

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  • Tirupathi ChandrupatlaTirupathi Chandrupatla (7/25/2020 6:16:00 AM)

    " Turn my heart into an opening blossom of joy"
    Love turns into an opening blossom. Beautifully described. Thank you.

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  • Savita TyagiSavita Tyagi (6/16/2020 6:06:00 PM)

    beautiful and intense expressions of love and passion. When the deepest emotions of love rise one feels it in each and every breath. May you always be blessed with this pure ecestacy of love.

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  • Glen KappyGlen Kappy (6/11/2020 8:43:00 AM)

    hey, valsa! i've been meaning to visit with your poems and am finally getting round to it. this one is charming and well-written. i hestitated at " brambles of your dark eyes" i suppose because here in the u.s. brambles usually have a negative connotation. but then i thought, ah, yes, one gets caught in, stays in the brambles.
    good stuff! -glen

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  • Ravi Kopra (6/7/2020 1:17:00 PM)

    main teri pyaari chaal-dhaal main
    rehna chahti hoon
    apnay dukh dard mitaanay k liyay,
    teray mohan k akarshan main aa kar
    kheenchi aati hoon mohabbat ki kashish main

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  • Rose Marie Juan-austinRose Marie Juan-austin (6/6/2020 10:56:00 PM)

    An excellent poem of love that holds us
    spellbound.
    Deeply passionate and heartwarming.
    Each and every stanza vividly portrays the kind
    of love that we so envisioned to have in life.
    Beautifully written with great rhyme
    and compelling imagery.
    Onto my Poem List.

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  • Kim BarneyKim Barney (6/6/2020 3:50:00 PM)

    Wow!
    Valsa, this is the most passionate poem I can ever remember from you! I'm not a big fan of love poems, but this one hits me really hard! I will have to put it on my favorites list and give it a ten for sure!

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  • Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet (6/6/2020 11:32:00 AM)

    And rock me in happy swings in love's delights

    MARVELLOUS POEM ONLY GOD GIFTS SOME ONE LIKE YOU MY DEAR POETESS I know god loves me and but yes ah not so much as he loves many like ye one day god will also love me when in heaven to HIM I make a Plea God love me love me love me

    1000000000000000000000000000000....> > > > > > > > > > > > > > > >

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  • Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet (6/6/2020 11:27:00 AM)

    Now soak me in the liquid passion of your heart
    That impels my spirit to scale new heights
    Turn my heart into an opening blossom of joy
    And rock me in happy swings in love's delights

    MARVELLOUS POEM ONLY GOD GIFTS SOME ONE LIKE YOU MY DEAR POETESS I know god loves me and but yes ah not so much as he loves many like ye one day god will also love me when in heaven to HIM I make a Plea God love me love me love me

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (6/6/2020 10:20:00 AM)

    While love arises body and heart are mesmerized with the fragrance of love. It brings feeling in every breath and pulse. The lover or beloved becomes a love-bitten dove. An exquisite inscription has been made on love having an insightful outlook. Marvelous one.10

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  • Khairul AhsanKhairul Ahsan (6/6/2020 1:25:00 AM)

    'My body warmly snuggled close to you
    Like a crooning, brooding, love-bitten dove' - lines that I loved most. This imagery I often visualize while thinking of love or a loved someone.

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  • Khairul AhsanKhairul Ahsan (6/6/2020 1:23:00 AM)

    A passionate poem on love and intimacy. I am sure the words will resonate in many a ear.
    Every line of the poem is an ardent expression of pulsating love that throbs the heart.10/10.

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  • Parameswaran Nair Damodaran NairParameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair (6/5/2020 9:59:00 AM)

    To drown inn the irresistible lure of your magnetism, To peer into the brambles of your dark eyes, my heart
    That waits to overflow like a river in spate, My body warmly snuggled close to you Like a crooning, brooding, love-bitten dove rock me in happy swings in love's delights. Beautiful lines that will remain in the cradle of poetical delight...10

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  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (6/5/2020 6:09:00 AM)

    True feelings of ecstatic love expressed in beautiful lines. Thank you for sharing a lovely poem.

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  • Vaibhav SimhaVaibhav Simha (6/5/2020 1:15:00 AM)

    This is so passionately written! Expressions like " a river in spate" and " brambles of your dark eyes" elevate the poeticism entailed in this piece, though I'd like to confirm if " brambles" herein refer to the iris or the dark furcations (not the dental term) that sometimes canvas the white part of the eye.

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  • Anil Kumar PandaAnil Kumar Panda (6/4/2020 8:10:00 AM)

    Very interesting love poem. Each stanza is a gem and makes one think about him/her lover. Enjoyed very much.

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  • Rajendran MuthiahRajendran Muthiah (6/4/2020 1:42:00 AM)

    Passions gyrate like the whirl in my heart and overflow like a river in spate.The cuckoo has become romantic!

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  • Susan WilliamsSusan Williams (6/4/2020 1:42:00 AM)

    My body warmly snuggled close to you / Like a crooning, brooding, love-bitten dove- - - - -> WoW! ! ! ! ! That sings of passion! ! ! Extremely well done dear Valsa! 10++++++++++

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