To Infinity And Beyond Poem by Rini Shibu

To Infinity And Beyond

Rating: 4.6


Your deeds should be like a tiny stone
thrown into the vast lake of world
Small to the eyes of many
And when you sink to the bottom
of this life in pain
Not been recognized
Hiding somewhere from the sights
But you will never know
the ripples you have created
reached deep down in the hearts
starting from a pin point
reaching  to infinity

Thursday, December 7, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: infinity
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 December 2017

Stupendous write. It captures the effect of man's good deeds and expresses the virtue of humility..10

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 December 2017

the ripples you have created reached deep down in the hearts starting from a pin point reaching  to infinity You have made a great statement Rini, a bright little thought-provoking theorem on the geometry of love. Great sharing.10++++ Subhas

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Rini Shibu 11 December 2017

Thanks Subhas, lovely comment

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 11 December 2017

Wonderful poem Rini. But you will never know the ripples you have created reached deep down in the hearts starting from a pin point reaching to infinity Profound thoughts woven into a poem.

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Rini Shibu 11 December 2017

Thanks Geetha for liking my woven thoughts

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Valsa George 11 December 2017

Each action of ours like a stone thrown into the water creates ripples! So before doing something we have to be careful to do such acts which will leave only positive impacts! A wise write, Rini!

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Rini Shibu 11 December 2017

Thank you so much for posting your feedback

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Nudershada Cabanes 11 December 2017

Our deeds no matter how small creates ripples and leaves an impression in the minds and hearts of people we have touched.

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Rini Shibu 11 December 2017

Thanks Nuder for visiting this poem

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Lamar Cole 07 December 2017

This is a great thought invoking poem about to infinity and beyond.

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