Bri Edwards

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Toilet Humor.... [dedicated To P H Poet Loke Kok Yee; Humor/Humour; Short] - Poem by Bri Edwards

As on the toilet I sat,
and after I had 'shat',
I heard below a giggle.
I looked; I saw some...
crap wiggle....
here and there inside...
the bowl it moved!
So I got a scoop and.....
it I removed.
'Silly little piece of crap;
shh! My wife's trying....
to take a nap! ! '

(October 27, 2015)

Topic(s) of this poem: humour


Poet's Notes about The Poem

yes, Loke Kok Yee gave me the inspiration! thanks, Bro! bri :)

Comments about Toilet Humor.... [dedicated To P H Poet Loke Kok Yee; Humor/Humour; Short] by Bri Edwards

  • Aries Profanisaurus (11/25/2015 1:52:00 PM)


    Oh dear. It would have been better to flush it away before it caused any more trouble. But I guess a talking shit could have made you famous in a way. Could even have a chance at becoming president. Am sure it could not do worse than obama or clinton. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 27, 2015

Poem Edited: Friday, May 20, 2016


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