With time,
Life falls upon you
Like a ton of bricks,
And you realize
Too late,
How to guide your life
And avoid "all free"
And stupid, risks.
Never too late to wake up to a new dawning. If the comma after stupid is intentional, then indeed, avoiding mistakes is stupid. The ignorance of youth is very well expressed in this thoughtful poem.
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With time Life falls upon you Like a ton of bricks, ...... outstanding conceptualization. Brilliantly put.