Trail Poem by Glen Kappy

Trail

Rating: 5.0


from 'While Passing Through'/Fall

October morning.
Trail of silvery circles
on the damp flagstone—
the snail—poem—thought
that eludes me.

Saturday, October 7, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,fall,october,poem,track,trail
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
On snails, one my favorite poems that I've written is 'Snail Mornings.'
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Laurie Van Der Hart 21 October 2017

Silvery snail trail - there's nothing like it. Amazing stuff. Unless you step on it barefoot...

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Glen Kappy 21 October 2017

you know i never have stepped barefoot on a snail trail. but i hardly go barefoot at all. having grown up in nyc, i learned to protect my feet always- hence my hardly-calloused innocent feet. -ah the delight in God's creatures! thanks for your visiting and commenting, laurie. be well! -glen

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Geetha Jayakumar 14 October 2017

Beautiful comparison of Autumn and snail. Seasons leaves silvery trail like snail. Loved reading it.

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Glen Kappy 14 October 2017

Thank you, Geetha. I don't recall seeing a comment from you before. If this is correct, then nice to meet you here at PH. If not, then please excuse my mistake. I enjoy meeting people through poetry here, and the circle of acquaintance keeps on expanding. Be well! -Glen

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Glen Kappy

Glen Kappy

New York, NY USA
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