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Transient Beauty

Rating: 5.0

In the mirror of her eyes~
all the hues of the edelweiss,
a shining star for one night.

Poem by Marieta Maglas

Transient Beauty
Sunday, July 19, 2020
Poem Poems: 426 / 500
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,mirror,night,star
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 19 July 2020

The beauty and delicacy of this poem, transcends the written word and so delicately reaches the spirit. Just enchanting! Merci bien, Madame.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 13 September 2020

make it a shining star for all the nights

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 13 August 2020

Wow a brilliant poem reflecting the stars in eyes so poetically wow. Great in brevity. Kudos! Plz do read and comment your thoughts on my newest prose titled, " face veils/face masks same thing " as it fosters an understanding of the shared veiling practice btw east and west since history.

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Rajendran muthiah 20 July 2020

The flowery plant , edelweiss has a short span of life. So its colors reflected from the eyes too.

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Very nice. Short and sweet!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 October 2021

True naturalist (not surrealist) painting added, most beautiful expression in her face. Fantastic painter.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 October 2021

This is poem sublimest, dear Marieta! Happiest to 'see' you here now, Truly very happy am I since PF. Have I said EXCELLENT POEM? 5 Stars and to my Favourites

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Mystic Indian 24 October 2021

deep and profound. thank you for your expression.

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Yiyan Han 23 October 2020

Your beauty leads to enjoy " Edelweiss" https: //.youtube/watch? v=7vV5fqd9fhI So pure and innocent 5+

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