Transitions Poem by Harley White

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Rating: 4.8

Seasons pass in life's procession,
days and nights in swift progression,
granting pleasures with each clime
while future measures out the time…

Stamina I lately lack.
Will it like the tides come back,
or am I reaching earthly end?
What will lie beyond the bend?

All that waxes also wanes.
As old age brings losses, pains,
I'll ease my way through what remains,
seeking out true wisdom's gains,

and try to sing like nightingales,
before my mortal being fails…

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Monday, June 18, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: aging,changes,life and death,seasons
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem was written on the occasion of my birthday in June.

Painting ~ Sea and Cliffs ~Edward Henry Potthast (1857-1927)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 26 June 2018

Wow! Beautifully written, time is on our side when we are young but as old age approaches time can be cruel but wisdom is a gift to inspire the young if they care to listen!

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Harley White 26 June 2018

Thank you so much! I appreciate your reading and complimentary comment...

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Akhtar Jawad 22 June 2018

Old age is the age of lacking, missing and recollecting the charms that we had in our childhood and youth. But one charm that has grown and is still growing, is wisdom. Atleast we have one thing to make up our deshaped faces. A great poem.

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Harley White 23 June 2018

I see you are basically in agreement with my poem... Thank you for the comment!

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Bill Cantrell 18 June 2018

Your poem inspired me to write, once Upon a Star, my attempt of a tribute to your unique poetry!

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Harley White 18 June 2018

So glad my poem inspired you! I am off to your page to read your poetic gift of Upon a Star...

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Bill Cantrell 18 June 2018

May the tides come back to you in endless waves, no nightingale sings poetry as the likes of you my friend!

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Harley White 18 June 2018

What a beautiful, poetic comment! Thank you for your constant encouragement and support!

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Kelly Kurt 18 June 2018

It happens to the best of us, Harley. My body aches every day but I would not trade for my 20 year old body if I had to give up an iota of experience, wisdom or knowledge.

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Harley White 18 June 2018

Thank you for the comment Yes, I understand and would not go back either...

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