Vijay Sai

Veteran Poet - 1,538 Points (30 12 1975 / Trichy, South India)

Trap - Poem by Vijay Sai

Save me, Save me,
I'm dying-
I'm close to breathing my last,
Save me! Oh!
I'm struggling to free myself-
The enemy is after me
How could I shout!
Save me!
I'm cornered,
It's getting over,
That's all!
The little ant could only scream-
but couldn't save itself
from being a prey to a spider
in its thin web!

Comments about Trap by Vijay Sai

  • Bharati Nayak (9/25/2015 12:32:00 AM)

    A cry in desperation, it comes from very deep.This cry may be in true physical sense when one flees for life or in emotional sense when we are drowned in gloom, finding no love, no friends, no support system.We feel suffocated.The poem nicely portrays the feelings. (Report) Reply

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  • (6/17/2013 8:20:00 AM)

    I like animal poems I have a poem called spider and the fly I think you can see indifferent with our styles (Report) Reply

  • (5/24/2010 3:49:00 AM)

    Excellent Analogy. I don't understand God's Design of the Universe. Theologists say Ant and Spider are both the forms of the same God. God eating God. Oh! God what is this Design? May be akin to Mukesh and Anil come from same parentage, Ambani. When One becomes Extra Two, conflicts are bound to happen. The Truth is, both are from the same fountain. (Report) Reply

  • (11/21/2009 12:42:00 AM)

    Who is there, of sufficient age, who has not seen that we have our own spider awaiting us: Death. (Report) Reply

  • (8/28/2009 8:41:00 PM)

    wow! ! ! ! ! amazing! ! ! sometimes we re ants! ! ! sometimes we re drowned in a ocean of problems and care but no hand... no help... no hope... no friend... no family... no succour... no aid................ just one sentence must be uttred MY GOD! my LORD! YA ALLAH! I need your intervention very urgently! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (6/15/2009 7:07:00 AM)

    I feel the desperation, but not really the struggle...mmm...hard. trap...
    the poem speaks for itself sufficiently without the astericks?
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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 15, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 31, 2012

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