Trees In Concrete Jungle Poem by Bharati Nayak

Trees In Concrete Jungle

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I peeped out of the window

To see the trees,

That line the pavements,

Giving shadows and shelter

To the needy wretched creatures.

Men and animals

Together stick under the shade

That give relief from the scorching sun.

The trees suck the smokes

Billowing out of the running vehicles.

Themselves drenched in thick dust

They look helpless

In this concrete jungle

Forlorn and lonely among many strangers.

There are blaring sounds and shouts of all hues

But not a word of kindness

People seem as heartless as the concrete buildings.

My heart went to the tree

Who seemed lost among strangers

Being hurt by callousness and apathy of people

Who never cared to feel its feeling.


In my imagination

I held the branch of the tree

As if it was the hand of my beloved

Bowed and kissed

Whispering as if to say

Never mind, where ever you stay

My heart is with you.

Saturday, October 20, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: feelings,nature,tree
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 23 January 2019

Trees! ! ! ! Giving shadows and shelter! With the romance of nature and the fragrance of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 02 November 2018

This is so beautiful and flawless poetry lady your mind is beauty

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Bharati Nayak 02 November 2018

wow- - A lovely compliment, thank you Poet Poet for your encouragement.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 October 2018

This is really an outstanding poem on Nature that attracts the readers to read over and over again. I love this poem and the way of presentation. Thanks again.

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Bharati Nayak 02 November 2018

Many thanks for coming back to read this poem again.It is so encouraging to know that my poem is liked by poets like you.

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Susan Williams 27 October 2018

love love love this poem... I don'r think I wull ever see a tree in the city the same way, ny dear. I see red when people carve their trunks don't the know that can give access to disease and insects? Fantastgic topic and your verses touched me with emotions! 10++++++++++++++ and onto fav list

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Bharati Nayak 28 October 2018

Wow- -Love your comments as they come from the most caring heart like an oxygen giving tree. God bless you dear Susan Williams.

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Susan Williams 27 October 2018

sorry for typos- eyesight thingee- -but love this poem

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Daniel Brick 26 October 2018

The last stanza of your poem is absolutely radiant, the rapport between you and the tree is a trans-species friendship that brings tears to my eyes, happy tears because you have crossed a border between alien life forms - human and plant - and made a connection with plant life that can grow and thrive. The long opening stanza shows what is wrong in the present but that luminous last stanza is a vision of a beautiful future.

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Bharati Nayak 02 November 2018

Thank you so much Daniel Brick for your sensitive reading and touching comment.

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