Trial- Haiku-1 Poem by Bharati Nayak
Trial- Haiku-1
Summer sun spews fire
Pigeons coo under a roof
Breaking rude stillness.
Summer sun spews fire Pigeons coo under a roof Breaking rude stillness. Thank you ma'am for breaking the poetic stillness through this Haiku, a touch of loneliness shadows this poem. Poets of your cadre should try Haiku's..so that a new era would dawn soon. I was waiting to read a poem since long. 10 for it. Thank you for sharing the poem.Subhas
The beauty of your words just overwhelm me.Thank you very much for the inspiration.
I love the first line with climate change it seems like it Bravo!
Breaking rude stillness.thanks madame for your lovely poem shearing 10++++++++++
bharati, i feel it! and the pigeon's coo breaks the rude stillness of oppressive heat. the coo is cool. i'm liking your tanka and haiku. glen
Lovely haikus. Insightful and well articulated. Thanks for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/9/2024 12:32:33 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Those rude pigeons. already known the the beauty you create in that pen of yours
I know in reverse of your write. The stillness perhaps the reason of such wonderful words. But if it is the pigeons NYC shall inspire you beyond your dreams. :)
Thank you for your lovely comments.It makes me wonder whether it is stillness or pigeon that made me write and attract great poets to read my poem.