# # True Integration - A Double Etheree Poem Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

the revolution must indeed take place in each one of us....that is the only true revolution...

A very good poem written about a very good subject. Good Write. Lynn

'True Integration' is necessary in the world. Thanks for speaking to this issue.

brilliant.....well done

Rightly said 'it should start from with every one'! Beautiful form and theme with a nice message! Congrats!

well structured....good diction and thought provoking...thanks for sharing 10+

I love your ending. This is a difficult form that tends to throw grammar to the curb to make it fit, but you do a minimum of that here.

Perfectly chosen words which suit well the double etheree; but would still be a great poem in any other form as well; as it's the ideas which are most palatable.

If all men (and women) agree to be equal, integration will truly last....but let's be realistic, not everyone is a good apple. The ending is what made the poem for me, I don't know all the details about integration though, , , , But what I do know is that the writing style (double etheree, is it?) is fantastic and challenging, so I applaud. Good write.

brilliant thoughts in a brilliant style.. honest and practical theme a tough one 10+++ lovelots, Maia