Trust Assumed Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Trust Assumed

Rating: 5.0


Shared space
With someone
Who knows what it takes...
To have honesty relayed to give,
And committed!

In a uniting relationship,
Communicating has to exist.
And if resisted questions come...
Someone is hiding something done!
And if this is kept hidden and unclear,
Doubts arise to allow a separation feared.

And this shouldn't keep a togetherness sought...
If from the beginning,
Things are laid out on the table...
Enabling truths to be spoken
Before discovering a trust 'assumed'
Has been broken.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marci Made 10 July 2007

This is just fantastic.....Absolutely nothing, nothing at all can work, move forward, grow, flouish or be sustained without Trust. It's just a no/go....Pathetic but evident in the failure of so many, 'what could've, should've been' relationships.....This is a shining star of a poem here Lawrence.......marci.xo. :) [hot enough for you yet? ? one more day to go..]

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