Tumbleweeds Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Tumbleweeds

Rating: 4.1


Balls of dead foliage
Rolling through the aid of wind
A great fire hazard.


Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 17 July 2020

Lovely little poem, expressing great concern for the environment. But most important is your eyes for keen observation

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 July 2020

so true, these dead leaf balls can be a big fire hazard, but since the dead pieces can fly in all directions with the wind and they can still grow, that big fire hazard is far from my bed show, methinks, a sparkling poem you created, my dearest friend, the great poetess, i constantly am enjoying all your poetic poems, since the very first time we met, God's greatest Blessings for you and your beloved family....

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 July 2020

My dearest friend, Now I wonder no response of me to see here yet? I always bother why this lasts so long so very very long it makes me no strong what's going on, dear? but as you kniow me, i have no fear this oh so beauteous poem needs impressing comments to the brim....just a simple song of my heart, not the whole just a tiny part...........................your friend Sylvia

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Akhtar Jawad 14 July 2020

The haiku describing the aftermaths of a fire, a beautiful poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 July 2020

..........................A great fire hazard. Cutest crystal clear composition in this celebrating creation, my dearest friend Mrs. Juan Austin. Amazing alligorical alliterations! I have enjoyed very much your lovely careful composed words They are written down in a beautiful way word after word. My grandest applause for the great poetess, God Bless You and your beloved family

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Robert Austin 01 February 2021

I can picture them rolling across the plains of America...

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Bryan Smoot 07 October 2020

Reminds me if living in the Colorado plains...

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 September 2020

dead foliage Rolling through the aid of wind very fine way of expressing. tony

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The characteristics of the thistle is such that its upper branching gets separated from its roots by the waves of wind may prove fire hazard....very meaningful and with a message...10++ 1

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Shaun Cronick 18 July 2020

Just three lines but a lot to read into them about people and life. Many thanks Rose Marie for me a great and neat metaphor poem.10++ and deserved too. Take care and I wish you well.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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