Twilight Poem by Bob Blackwell

Twilight

Rating: 5.0


That time between
light and darkness,
when twilight reigns,
long soft shadows,
at life’s dusk, is the
beginning of our end.

On our mindscape
light, grey, and dark
clouds reappear, as
shaded memories of
sunny spells, storms,
future low depressions.

In our minds eye,
pretty coloured
patterns formed
bring a smile, a
tear, a angry flash
a thunder roar,
a happy sunny face.

From sunset,
evening time
we learn
how times of rest
bring peace to mind,
that dark clouds
can be dissolved.

As our sun settles on
edge of world, it
collects our problems,
dissolves them
into the mist of time,
to rise once more
at dawns moment;
renewed, unsullied,
clean and fresh,
to light a
different world.

Friday, August 14, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: storms
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 18 August 2009

Ammazing wording dear great poet! thoughtful! 10+

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Shashendra Amalshan 17 August 2009

Beautiful! ! ! Specially the Last stanza is very beautiful.. I feel this is the loveliest poem I have read of yours sir... It is like 6 p.m here, I just woke up after a nap, and turned to your page Very good, kind of had a soothing effect.. without the peace of mind, man can turn in to a mad person.. 10 regards shan.

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Yelena M. 14 August 2009

so rare to meet a beautiful write on the harmony of light and darkness in nature...thanks for sharing, Bob. A.

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~ Jon London ~ 14 August 2009

Brilliance shines through your every piece Bob, a pleasure as always to view your work....excellent flowing freshness 10+++

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Marilyn Lott 14 August 2009

This is the perfect poem to start out the day, Bob. It is fresh and hopeful. A '10+! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Raj Nandy 04 November 2009

The first stanza itself reflects the mood and theme of the poem so eloquently! The poem also breathes hope and rekindles our hidden aspirations, - yearnings for a better world beyond time, - having reached the twilight hours of our lives! 10 ++ -Raj Nandy

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C. P. Sharma 19 August 2009

As ever, you stand tall as a poet. I loved, As our sun settles on edge of world, it collects our problems, dissolves them into the mist of time, to rise once more at dawns moment; renewed, unsullied, clean and fresh, to light a different world. Very well concluded. CP

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Patrick A. Martin 19 August 2009

Again you show us the sunset of hope and the promiss of a new tomorrow Thank you.

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Sandra Fowler 19 August 2009

The magical imagery of twilight is captured in this beautiful poem. You are a rare wordsmith. Bob. How wonderful to know that when the last dusk has been written lights will come on in another world.10/10. As always, Sandra

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Michael Moorcroft 18 August 2009

I was going to write a poem on the twilight, though after reading this I don't think I could have done it as good as you! ! 10+++

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