Umbrella Poem by Lamar Cole

Umbrella

Rating: 4.0


Some people must have thought that they were going insane.
Because Perry and his girlfriend were walking arm in arm in a heavy rain.
Perry's umbrella said to them why haven't you opened me up yet.
Then you two lovebirds wouldn't have to be all wet.
Perry knew that his umbrella was speaking out of place.
Because he just loved seeing the raindrops caress his girlfriend's face.

Sunday, November 5, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: rain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Hopkins 05 November 2017

Lovely, heartfelt poem. Well done.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 November 2017

Wonderful imaginary and imagery. Beautiful poem on love, rain and umbrella has been painted touchingly. Thank you dear Lamar for posting it.

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Sister Frances 05 November 2017

It makes me want to say aaawwwwww :)

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Robert Murray Smith 30 April 2018

An imaginative write full of delight.+++10

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Unnikrishnan E S 15 November 2017

Very Romantic.. I am carried away to my younger days of love/girlfriends/rain... howww!

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Unnikrishnan E S 15 November 2017

Hi Lam, Lovely narrative.. : : Perry knew that his umbrella was speaking out of place. Because he just loved seeing the raindrops caress his girlfriend's face: : Wow! ! ! : : raindrops caress his girlfriend's face: : wonderful feeling this line conveys... Thank you Lam..

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Practicing Poetess 14 November 2017

Wow, this is one of the sweetest ones I've seen you write in awhile! I'm a pushover for sweet & romantic! (The talking umbrella bit just increased the interest factor.) This poem needs a 10!

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Rini Shibu 05 November 2017

Umbrella, raindrops and girlfriend.. Lovely imagery Romantic poem

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