Umpiring A Competition...... [poem By Request; Kinda Short; Poem Competition Umpires] Poem by Bri Edwards

Umpiring A Competition...... [poem By Request; Kinda Short; Poem Competition Umpires]

Rating: 5.0


Elyas does progress through competition so well.
Gratitude, for the four umpires, in him does swell.
Doctors Nejati and Rang Avar are the names of two.
And two other nice humans with a good world view.
Elyas was impressed with their humanity concern.
From each other I'm sure they all can more learn.

Dr. Nejati kindly posed some questions to answer.
I bet Elyas handled them like a comfortable dancer.
It would be nice if all contestants could be 'the winner'.
But not winning is not as bad as being a sinner.

I send good luck wishes to my friend Elyas in Iran,
And to the Umpires for doing.....whatever they can.

(September 13,2013)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
my poemhunter friend ellias anderson aka captain A suggested a thank you poem would be nice to send to one of the umpires of his competition in iran.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marvin Brato 24 September 2013

Succinct piece of poetry, well-penned!

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Alookh (matin) 19 September 2013

good poem for the umpires! ! ....so melodious and perfect rhymes! pointing to an important subject that sometimes we forget : It would be nice if all contestants could be 'the winner'. But not winning is not as bad as being a sinner. i wish his success in this competition as his happines causes mine! ! ....waiting for good news from u Elli! ! ! ! and thanx to Bri! ! !

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 18 September 2013

Hmmm..... i should read it for thousands of times....

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 15 September 2013

i owe to you bri for this art God helps the humanity and the people who supports it.

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