Un - Answered.............. Poem by Sebastine Humaemo

Un - Answered..............



On a lonely night
with unanswered questions in heart
she walked to a near by cliff
with thoughts to end her life

All the way she planted her tears
soon it will grow to speak her pain
she didn't want to live
for the things happend in life

standing at the egde of cliff
her eyes gazed the skies
As if bidding a bye
tears rolled down her chin

Angels rushed to God
to say what's going on
with tear filled eyes
God rushed to save

before He reached for her hand
Angel witnessed her jump
like a rain drop
she was pulled towards the ground

the world was paused
seeing her crushed once for all
like a mad God rushed to the spot
with clothes torn apart

before closing her eyes
she put her question to God
why this happened to me
If you say Iam your child

with no words to speak
God kept crying aloud
while her soul smiled at Him
and walked its way.......





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ma lovable readers....this poem speaks about a wrong path......i never support sucide whtevr my b te reasons....guess i made a poem bfre, related to sucide....n said te same thing........

........just as a poet (I don't say myself anyway lol..) ....wanna make yu feel te pain...just combined te pain of te soul and te pain of God, How He will react seein His childrens goin fr t.....n wanna conclude as said n te poem....like...even God wont save yu if yu goin for sucide...rather He wll just cry for yu....

.............anythin can be turned in life....so we can.........n we will....sure God wll help us...is wht I wanna say....as it goes like we always go mad with God, if things not on our side....te soul in this poem also goes mad n walks on her way....questionin God.......hope yu wll like t....

........ love sebastine

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Winnie Angel 17 June 2009

understandable at times life starts with so much pain that it become unbearable to the one in pain....but the lesson is quite clear we have to put a strong being out of ourself to defeat the evil that's inside us........nice write with much to learn from for everyone........winniie

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Miriam Maia Padua 16 June 2009

ohhh, sad...i want to shout..this piece quenched my heart moving write...great story...great poetry touching...great thoughts here... nice idea to give us lessons in life Life is not ours...only God can take it back... 10++++++ maia

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Sadhana Mishra 16 June 2009

something different....

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