Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 92,599 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

Unbearable - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

The hardest thing to do
When convincing someone you are right,
Is removing the smell of sewage
Where you are insistant upon releasing
These 'revelations' and 'fresh' approaches.
Somehow your credibility will not be maintained!
Especially when the stench becomes unbearable...
And the garbage men have become your closest allies!


Comments about Unbearable by Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • (10/10/2006 8:19:00 AM)

    Oh too true; this one gave me a wicked chortle. Marilyn (Report)Reply

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  • (10/10/2006 7:58:00 AM)

    Nice poem man, very true nad rings many bells of many conversations,10 for tiyler (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 10, 2006

Poem Edited: Friday, October 15, 2010


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