Unbridled Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin


Rating: 5.0

Why does the ground I stand
Gives way
Whenever I see you

Why do I go weak
At the knees
When I am near you

Why do I seal
My lips
When you open yours

Why does the world
Seems still
And suspends time
When I am with you

Why do I feel full
And full of joy
By mere looking at you

Let me out
Of this feeling
Unbridled and unknown

It is a bottomless pit
That sweeps me down
To the state of oblivion

I want to fly
Explore the realm of knowledge
And set dominion
Over my existence

With this feeling
I am reduced
To a mere machine
Controlled by an unknown

Tuesday, October 17, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
Dr Dillip K Swain 02 February 2018

'Unbridled' is a lovely poem Rose........My favorite lines: I want to fly/Explore the realm of knowledge/And set dominion/Over my existence. Wonderful piece of poetry!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 February 2018

Thank you Dr.Dillip for this amazing comment.I will always treasure it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 29 March 2018

Yes Rose, that's love, you have beautifully designed a running commentary of how one feels in practice and what one undergoes while those moments of ecstasy pass through. Great poem. So romantic. 10++++++++++++++++ Subhas

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Subhas, thank you for this amazing comment. I feel honored.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 March 2018

I want to fly Explore the realm of knowledge And set dominion Over my existence.....beautiful poetic expression! Loved revisiting it!

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Nabakishore Dash 26 April 2022

awesome poetic skill.

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Anjandev Roy 06 February 2020

Superb piece. Thank u, dear poetess. anjandev roy.

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Indira Renganathan 03 September 2019

A superb portrayal of love.....lovely poem Rose

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Valsa George 17 April 2019

This is absolutely what one feels when he/she is with the person for whom he/she develops a crush for the first time. As the love grows deeper, there will be more intimacy and many subjects to talk over! The initial stage of attraction is such that one forgets one's real self and is being totally controlled by some exciting emotion. You have beautifully described the initial 'fever' of being in love!

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 April 2019

Why do I feel full And full of joy By mere looking at you.. controlled by an unknown. passion expressed so well. tony

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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