Unbridled Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin
Unbridled
Why does the ground I stand
Gives way
Whenever I see you
Why do I go weak
At the knees
When I am near you
Why do I seal
My lips
When you open yours
Why does the world
Seems still
And suspends time
When I am with you
Why do I feel full
And full of joy
By mere looking at you
Let me out
Of this feeling
Unbridled and unknown
It is a bottomless pit
That sweeps me down
To the state of oblivion
I want to fly
Explore the realm of knowledge
And set dominion
Over my existence
With this feeling
I am reduced
To a mere machine
Controlled by an unknown
Yes Rose, that's love, you have beautifully designed a running commentary of how one feels in practice and what one undergoes while those moments of ecstasy pass through. Great poem. So romantic. 10++++++++++++++++ Subhas
Subhas, thank you for this amazing comment. I feel honored.
I want to fly Explore the realm of knowledge And set dominion Over my existence.....beautiful poetic expression! Loved revisiting it!
This is absolutely what one feels when he/she is with the person for whom he/she develops a crush for the first time. As the love grows deeper, there will be more intimacy and many subjects to talk over! The initial stage of attraction is such that one forgets one's real self and is being totally controlled by some exciting emotion. You have beautifully described the initial 'fever' of being in love!
Why do I feel full And full of joy By mere looking at you.. controlled by an unknown. passion expressed so well. tony
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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'Unbridled' is a lovely poem Rose........My favorite lines: I want to fly/Explore the realm of knowledge/And set dominion/Over my existence. Wonderful piece of poetry!
Thank you Dr.Dillip for this amazing comment.I will always treasure it.