lady grace


Unbroken Lines In An Empty Page - Poem by lady grace

when tears fill the earth
and clouds seems so dark
rivers stop flowing
as to dark blocks the night...

unwanted songs on my pillow
weep until early morn
broken lines of joys and laughter
cover the darkness of my room...

in a moment
where you and I are one
dancing in the soundless raindrops
sharing touches of kindness
of words, lines and phrases...


the gentleness of your sway
the rhymes of unsung tune
the bouquet of colorful bunches
all I can say “”I love them all””…

droplets of morning dew
partly shakes our memories
it reminds us of great moments
of laughter, grief and sorrow...

as we see rainbows behind mountains
and flying birds above the sky
as the flowing tears never stay sweet
of withering fields that runs dry...

the transmission of hate and love
is a loving sign of independence
a smile that glitters in our lips
is the mirth that grow in our hearts


as we end this journey
in pages of unbroken lines
the love grows partly shared
to everyone who leaves and stay…


Comments about Unbroken Lines In An Empty Page by lady grace

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (2/18/2010 4:40:00 PM)


    the rungs on deep of night by art of love
    dew never uncovers as it redeems before light, wonderful write, most passionate yet graceful by ingenuity, like autumn breeze smooching the stance of nature, and emotive too,10+++, thanks for sharing
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  • (2/17/2010 2:29:00 AM)


    Great. you have just threaded the end of the point of an started end....like
    a wind...directed to wind in the wintertime of wisdom....the lasting cool
    burn to breeze the humid air of the pole....beautiful dear lady...God bless...
    a 10 +++++
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  • John Knight (2/16/2010 7:52:00 AM)


    Thank you Grace - This is a lovely poem from a lovely Lady. It is all a poem should be - it has structure - plenty of rhthym and a touch of rhyme to ameliorate the flow. The sentiments are very empathetic and the dedication very moving. Poetry is verbalised emotion - expressing our inner musings in image - metaphor - similie and poetic language to craft something beautiful. You have done this perfectly Grace and produced poetic elegance. V 1 Dark clouds V 2 Tear soaked pillows V 3 Kind touches - words and dancing V 4 Loving hearts V 5 gentle sway - songs and sweet roses V 6 Laughter joy of greeting V 7 Rainbows - birds and tears of joy V 8 This poem is so so progressive Grace each verse moves us nearer the consumation of love 'The transmission of hate and love - is a loving sign of independence - a smile that glitters on our lips - is the mirth that grows in our spirit'. This is so so beautiful Grace thank you for sharing the harmony of your beautiful Spirit. Love you in Poetry - JOHN X (Report) Reply

  • (2/16/2010 5:04:00 AM)


    Very poetic
    excellent write
    great job
    done here
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  • Sadiqullah Khan (2/16/2010 4:55:00 AM)


    Truly for a knight, lady. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 16, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, June 4, 2010


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