A Joyous hymn a Joyful time
To be Compassionate and Sublime
A Blessed rain a Blissful year
To be Content and Dear
A Disciple and a Goal
To be Single and the Whole
A Beloved and a Lover
To be Shelter and the Cover
I have learnt those
From the mothers
My heart beats
Unconditionally
For others
(2008/6/8)
Another gem here, unconditional love what more can one give or want! *10*! ! A delightful poem! ! Best regards! Friend Thad
let me be the umbrella... the rain... the mountain... the river... the sun... the home... the garden... in your dome
I very much like these surprising metaphors, the Nightingale ...10... Tsira
The line I liked the most: 'I have learnt those from mothers'. Thanks for the spirit of generosity in this poem.
this again is filled with emotions indeed.. and liked the fast paced style of yours good.. with love shan
Unconditional love embracing everyone, a great idea. The poehm as an interesting inner flow which creates unity of the 'opposite', like Unconditional Love. 'To be Content and Dear A Disciple and a Goal To be Single and the Whole ' A very fine write! 10
... unconditional love learned by mothers is perfectly nailed and the poem is flowing well penned - joyous and joyful / blessed and blissful - lovely play with words.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautifully expressed....Your creations bring light to so many my friend.. Hope you've got plenty of that golden ink you write with left best wishes Jon