Unconditional Love Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Unconditional Love

Rating: 5.0


Her name is time,
And she said; ' I love you so much but I cannot wait and I am running.'
Then I said; 'My name is life and I too ran but I couldn't hold you.'
'Time is a cruel lass.' Wind murmured in a lonely night.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynn Glover 19 November 2009

A very good poem, Nimal, as we all know time waits for no one. However, as your poem states, we continually chase after it. Thanks for the invite. Lynn

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g black black 18 November 2009

that is a short poem, but it doesnt matter cuz it awesome you can explain time and life in not so much word and people can understand that that a verry verry good poem.....i gave it a 10 cuz u deserve it

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Sonya Florentino 17 November 2009

life running after time...no wonder we get old and tired....if we stopped, will time come to us?

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Sandra Fowler 17 November 2009

We can only live one day at a time. And make that day worth living. Touching reflections on the brevity of life as we know it. Blessings to you, Sandra

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