Under The Cherry-Tree Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Under The Cherry-Tree

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As I saw a muscled man walking by
I remember those summerdays as a passerby
when days were still warm and got hotter
Come here lie with me under the Cherry-tree, my doctor
So cosy and pleasant a warm companion
was I right or was it just an optional illusion?
Come lie close to me, cheek-to-cheek under the Cherry-tree
Make love to me, you're always busy I'm feelin' empty
Why should we be ashamed you my legal man set me on fire
have I to beg you, it's my part to get, like a car it's tire
let's do it in peaceful harmony, together under the Cherry-tree
my love, my man, my legal bed-a-mate, don't you love me?
The coldest wind of the North has come to sweep the ground here
A barren coolness fills the atmosphere
While shivering of winterblessings the evening freeze
My thoughts were still in those summerdays
Come here close to me under the Cherry-tree, my specialist
Make some hours free, be happy, enjoy life as it is


© Sylvia Frances Chan - Tuesday,6 Dec 2011

Under The Cherry-Tree
Monday, December 5, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: human being,husband,love,love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Under The Cherry Tree

poem by © Sylvia Frances Chan
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 December 2018

A very lovely poem. A vivid depiction of the passion felt for a wonderful man. Beautifully and lovingly penned.

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Thank you so much, dear Mrs. Juan-Austin, exactly 7 (seven) years after I submitted this poem, you are the first and only person who has given a response. Seven years, wow, where have the years gone to? Honestly said, you are a wonderful responder, with these precious comments loveliest words. I am touched very much.Thank you for reading the poem, it's about my own spouse, he's so dear to me. God's Blessings in abundance for you and your beloved spouse.

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Thank you so much, dear Mrs. Juan-Austin! I am very happy to see YOU here, exactly on the same date, but 7 years later, but at least you are here! Most delightful atmosphere when you are in my poem's presence.Once again, I have read your precious comments with a caring love.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 May 2020

As a passerby you have remembered the day with brilliance of mind. The muscle man was walking there under the cherry tree. The coldest wind of the North had come to sweep. The coolness was felt well and the beauty of cherry tree was amazingly perceived. Those summer days thoughts under the cherry tree still you have remembered. You were happy at that time as you are now. This poem is interestingly penned...10

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Bharati Nayak 04 June 2020

The beauty of cherry tree ignited the passion you reserve for your husband.

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Thank you so much, dear Bharati Poetess for your precious and honest comment. God Bless you in abundance.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 May 2020

4) This reaction is derived from my poem " Under The Cherry Tree" dated on theb 5th Dec.2011 and your most valuable comment seven years after data, that is then 5th Dec 2018 all your precious and valuable and loveliest words most appreciated by me, Sylvia © Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved A.D. Wednesday 26 May 2020

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 May 2020

3) you wrote on the 5th December 2018, exactly seven years after, a poem without readers....? you were the only one, the most precious one! This reaction is derived from my poem " Under The Cherry Tree" from 5th Dec.2011 and your most valuable comment seven years after data most appreciated by me, Sylvia

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 May 2020

2) your amazing responses were, no blurr, never they were! They were here all crystal clear, beautiful and precious, loveliest, worthiest and senseous,

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 May 2020

No Correspondence, Nor A Message, But.... After having discovered, that there was only ONE responder for my poem as Titled: " UNDER THE CHERRY TREE" today, seven years after date, to be exactly i don't exaggerate: 5 December 2011

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