Under The Gun Poem by louis rams

Under The Gun

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most all women love to critcize and complain
but if they did'nt- they'd find themselves in pain.
they say they want this and that done.
but! it's the men that are under the gun.

to hear them talk they are always right
if you disagree you've got a fight.
then they sit on their tail
just to see if you will fail
and when they see that you do it right
it's because you're in their sight.

then you come across a woman with a rare quality
on her loved one she uses psychology.
she then proceeds to say how a good job was done
and uses the 'what if'
if we take this piece and put it there
it will go great with that chair.

she has already learned how to work the man
and that is where she takes her stand
for now she has him in control
and will squeese the blood out
of his very soul.

this is why man is under the gun
and will very rarely see the sun.

so to all the men out there
look and listen and take care.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Yup.. true that.. they are in control.. cause we men let them eh...

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Linda Winchell 15 January 2009

Oh Poo, Poo Sir Joe! And you too Sir Louis! Not me! Ten! This is a great poem I have to admit But somethings you've written just don't seem to fit. Like criticize and we women complain! I think your wrong if you think that causes me some pain. I guess if you men are really feeling this way Then I guess my poem has ended And that's all I have to say today!

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Joseph Poewhit 15 January 2009

Man has his will but women get there way.

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