Under The Suns Light Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Under The Suns Light

Rating: 4.6


Up above the sky so high. Reaching
out to the clouds drifting by. While sitting
here on the mountain side. With golden
sunflowers down below. Grateful to let
time move so slow. Watching the cotton
as it floats across the sky, glowing in the
suns brilliant light. Catch it gently within
my grasp, close my eyes tight. Make a
wish with all my might... And let it go, out
amongst the winds that blow. What it'll
touch, where it'll land I do not know.

Under The Suns Light
Saturday, March 12, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 03 April 2022

And let it go, out amongst the winds that blow. What it'll touch, where it'll land I do not know.---I know! ! !

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 March 2022

A well crafted poem so beautifully and tenderly expressed.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 March 2022

The beautiful images in this poem made me at close range with this breathtaking scenery. The wonders of nature indeed hold us spellbound!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 14 March 2022

Wonderful poem. Loved it.......100

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 14 March 2022

Truly delightful and enchanting too, dear Rebecca! . I love sunflowers. The are magical flowers

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Koffi B Sossou 11 November 2025

What a wonderful naturalistic poem filled with imagism!

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Emma Mcullough 02 June 2025

Such a beautiful poem! I want to be a flower now! It captures a perfect panorama!

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Susan Williams 30 January 2023

Here I am reading this charming poem again and remembering how it feels to lie in the grass and enjoy God's handiwork---a thousand stars my friend

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Susan Williams 03 April 2022

oh and a five star rating of course!

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Susan Williams 03 April 2022

It will drift around and touch all of us who are honored to know your sweet heart! favorite

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