Undiagnosed Poem by Rini Shibu

Undiagnosed

Rating: 5.0


Buzzing a song flew around
Quietly crossed the barrier
Entered into the blood streams
And slowly spread into the body
Temperature shot up
And worsened with the pill
Became restless and started sweating
No one could diagnose
what sickness it could be

Friday, March 23, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: confused
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 March 2018

A poem that warms up the blood and helps rush them into the veins of the soul. Well penned Rini.

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Rini Shibu 24 March 2018

Thanks Subhas.**

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 March 2018

Buzzing of a song flew around and brought confused situation. An amazing poem is wisely and humorously presented...10

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Rini Shibu 24 March 2018

Thank you so much for visiting

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 November 2022

Typo: thought provoking

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 November 2022

Diagnosis is so crucial dear poetess. Improper diagnosis may lead to fatal consequences. A though provoking write

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M Asim Nehal 04 November 2018

Such confusion is bound to happen specially when test reports says something whereas the body and mind says something else, a fantastic poem, Rini.10++++

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Robert Murray Smith 08 May 2018

Rini, a song sings inside and sends us into a spin. +++10 Robert

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Akhtar Jawad 15 April 2018

After undergoing a number of tests the doctor failed to diagnose her sickness and said, I think you are perfectly all right. A poet was sitting there and waiting his turn, he said, No she is not, I think she is in love.

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Rini Shibu 16 April 2018

Wonderful comment Akhtarji..

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