Undream Poem by Aqua Flower

Undream

Rating: 5.0


where is my imagination
I need it now
my heart is bleeding
under my breath I make a vow
the hatred keeps feeding
I am undreaming
numb with confusion
where is my illusion

Copyright @ Aquaflower

Saturday, September 8, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: confusion,emotions,loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 11 September 2018

I am undreaming numb with confusion where is my illusion......... impressive and touching. Beautiful poem.

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Aqua Flower 12 September 2018

Your comments are always welcomed and appreciated.. Thank you!

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Carl Roussell 10 September 2018

Empty is the life that has no dreams - a 10

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Aqua Flower 12 September 2018

Dreams keep us filled with happiness! thank you for sharing your thoughts!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 08 September 2018

Such a well penned poem...,10++++++++

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Aqua Flower 15 September 2018

Thank you...i appreciate your comment 😊

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