Saturday, December 26, 2009

Undreamt Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

I felt like swinging on moon
Like playing drums on moon
And even sleeping on its bed
While playing with stars around
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Kranthi Pothineni
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Louis Rams 28 December 2009

LIKE THE SONG: TO DREAM THE BEAUTIFUL DREAM, TO FIGHT THE UNBEATABLE FOE. SO IS YOUR POEM.

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Antonio Liao 28 December 2009

i like and love it....such a resting poem i ever read....so alluring in thought and spirited move of gladnesss... God bless a 10 +++++

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Marieta Maglas 28 December 2009

Felt like painting the dark sky With shining and falling stars Along with a glowing moon wonderful meditative poem, beautiful moment of symbolic fusion between human being and nature 10++++++++++

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Eyan Desir 27 December 2009

A well writtten poem good job........

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Janell Cressman 27 December 2009

i don't really know what to say, it is a brillint piece,

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 27 December 2009

words very well expressed. it flowed fluently.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 27 December 2009

What is not possible in the waking stage, that can be made possible in one's dreanland.

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