Kranthi Pothineni


Undreamt Dream - Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

I felt like swinging on moon
Like playing drums on moon
And even sleeping on its bed
While playing with stars around

Felt like painting the dark sky
With shining and falling stars
Along with a glowing moon
While dipping my brush in sun

Felt like filling up the dry seas
Placing back the fallen leafs
And refreshing withered flowers
While digging wells in hot deserts

I felt it while my tooth are in jar
My ears in rack and eyes on table
And legs standing beside my bed
While I'm resting sound like a baby


Comments about Undreamt Dream by Kranthi Pothineni

  • Louis Rams (12/28/2009 11:35:00 PM)


    LIKE THE SONG: TO DREAM THE BEAUTIFUL DREAM, TO FIGHT THE UNBEATABLE FOE.
    SO IS YOUR POEM.
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  • (12/28/2009 9:30:00 PM)


    i like and love it....such a resting poem i ever read....so alluring in
    thought and spirited move of gladnesss... God bless a 10 +++++
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  • (12/28/2009 3:04:00 PM)


    Felt like painting the dark sky
    With shining and falling stars
    Along with a glowing moon

    wonderful meditative poem, beautiful moment of symbolic fusion between human being and nature

    10++++++++++
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  • (12/27/2009 5:12:00 PM)


    A well writtten poem
    good job........
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  • (12/27/2009 10:07:00 AM)


    i don't really know what to say, it is a brillint piece, (Report) Reply

  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (12/27/2009 7:11:00 AM)


    words very well expressed. it flowed fluently. (Report) Reply

  • Rajaram Ramachandran (12/27/2009 1:23:00 AM)


    What is not possible in the waking stage, that can be made possible in one's dreanland. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 26, 2009



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