Unfaithful Poem by Eyan Desir
Unfaithful
With lips sweet like sugar
Who can resist?
Where love and lust meet
Temptation pours
When eyes kiss
Passion overflows
Through the door
Sneak in the dark
Switch off the lights
Become her slave
Through the night
Set the soul a fire
Betray a love
Act like a friend
Lies polish lies
Deceit never ends
She will never be yours
Only comfort in bed.
excellent written poem belonging to lyrism, touching 10/10/10
She will be forever yours'last stanza second last line, very good. AJS
nicely done..well written...if we evaluate this as poem, of course this is fine..ok, wait...for me, coz am not a poet like the author so i will leave my words as common reader...i like the title, and the contents..but...BUT... i dont like unfaithul people...and the last stanza, i think it's there''only to comfort in bed? ? ''...my goshhhhhh...i think, i dont like this line...smileeeeeeee...its a poem my sweetheart, i know...mine is a commnt based upon the wrds id like to say...so, all in all, ur piece is a nice one...
'Deceit never ends' well said...is there a begin to end infact? 10
WOW THAT WAS A REALLY GOOD POEM I LOVE THE WAY YOU PUT YOUR WORDS IN. love and light nathan cx
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 9:59:18 AM # 1.0.0.1119
it's a good idea they say betrayal is sweet.