Unfaithful Poem by Eyan Desir

WOW THAT WAS A REALLY GOOD ONE EYAN...WELL WRITTEN

its a sad poem. but this is one of the bitter realities of life. take care

Indeed good poem… ‘She will never be yours’’Only comfort in bed. May I rewrite! He’ll never be yours/ Only discomfort in bed’ Lolol Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

I know someone who might feel that way. I have almost felt that way before and I found a way to keep it from happening. You have written a very good poem. I doubt that I'm that good. I hope I can become as good as you and all of the other poets on here. Thank you for alowing me to read this poem of yours. I wish you good luck with you other poems.

nicely done..well written...if we evaluate this as poem, of course this is fine..ok, wait...for me, coz am not a poet like the author so i will leave my words as common reader...i like the title, and the contents..but...BUT... i dont like unfaithul people...and the last stanza, i think it's there''only to comfort in bed? ? ''...my goshhhhhh...i think, i dont like this line...smileeeeeeee...its a poem my sweetheart, i know...mine is a commnt based upon the wrds id like to say...so, all in all, ur piece is a nice one...

'Deceit never ends' well said...is there a begin to end infact? 10

i like it very iuntresting poem

i like it very iuntresting poem

WOW THAT WAS A REALLY GOOD POEM I LOVE THE WAY YOU PUT YOUR WORDS IN. love and light nathan cx

I am a fan of this poem: p