Unfinished Limerick Poem by Kim Barney
Unfinished Limerick
Good thing I'm not a poacher;
I'm not a law encroacher.
I may have my flaws
But I obey laws;
The other two lines were written today, but I invite my friends to help me come up with a good fifth line.
I tried
Does your daughter need training? I'll coach her.
but that doesn't seem to go with the rest of the poem unless the daughter needs training on how to obey the laws.
25 June 2016
Kosher bacon? Very funny line, Dan, but I don't think it fits the poem.
You just about had.....proper fifth line is Until she's eighteen I'll just coach her.
Nice try, but who is SHE? This pronoun has no antecedent. Thanks anyway, Wes. I'll be checking in on Oogie later.
I had to look up the word CLOTURE to see what it meant. My dictionary says: The closure of a Congressional debate. Thanks for teaching me a new word.
Man made and those of nature. and thanks for the nice picture too!
Very nice thought. Fits in with the rest of the poem, but not a very good rhyme. Thanks for the suggestion.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Lest I end up on a wanted poster!
Not a true rhyme, Smoky, but I really like the idea behind it. Thanks!