Unknown Heart Poem by Ellias Anderson Jr.

Unknown Heart

Rating: 5.0


A huge space, with a large door that just opened with a bell,
Lots of people were entered, they were scared, and that place was like the hell!

You would enter there easily without any fear
And you can stay there, playing with your own tear

After sometimes people will make that place a part
Its story will stay a mystery, the tale of unknown heart!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry O'leary 20 October 2012

Very much feeling expressed here, Ellias... Very nice poem... Terry

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Unwritten Soul 01 August 2012

Imagery your painted here were so good, Unknown heart, full of mystery and beg for certainty...Unknown heart however never equal to Unwritten Soul, which try to fit your own heart, of everybody_Soul

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John Hayes 01 August 2012

Brilliant imagination!

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Rachel Streek 31 July 2012

I like this one a lot.

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Ellias Anderson Jr.

Ellias Anderson Jr.

Iran, Islamic republic of
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