Unlucky Or Destiny? Poem by Luwi Habte

Unlucky Or Destiny?



What if I were happy
Through everything I did daily?

What if I was laughing yesterday?
Quite be proud through who I am and feel for the day?

What if I make my precious proud of me?
Instead of making him crying through the stuff he sees?

What is the matter with me and my self?
With out my mistake I do able to lose whom I love?

Is this my payment for the sins I have done till yet?
Or a temptation, just my measurement for more cleaness?

Most probably I thought I am unlucky
Which I have seen my heart broken suddenly
Which I have seen my love dyeing early

April 21,2009

Tuesday, April 21, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: april
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aiswarya. T.anish 22 April 2009

You are not at all unlucky, you are awesome! And your poem's really good. Buck up, Luwi!

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 21 April 2009

u are not unlucky u are amazing! and the poem is really great..loved reading it

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