Untouchable Beauty Poem by Elena Sandu

Untouchable Beauty

Rating: 5.0


Step out... Keep away
from me.
Said the beautiful doll
in the glass case...
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-I.......... Am............. Dust......... Free.......


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Don't try your hands on me.
Not even in your dream.


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The glass case, dust free,
kept the beautiful doll.

...End of she....

Sunday, October 28, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: beautiful
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 03 November 2012

Unique style and presented in very original way..and the meaning is more authentic..very well done Elena_Soul

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Hamid Negah 31 October 2012

Elena, You have strong feeling with short poem...well done.

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Aung Si 31 October 2012

Wow! wonderful, fantastic and breathtaking style and awesome fashion.Well done! !

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Wabi Sabi 30 October 2012

someone said, , , if you have not been sick, you wouldn't been able to understand how difficult being sick is. I think this can be compared to any kinds of people's difficulty, meaning that being dust free is like people free and life free. I hope no one is like that.

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