As I waver into the night sleep,
I can't help but think,
As I wander and blink,
As I wander so deep...
I thought of mistakes,
some I would regret,
And some that I did not
intentionally forget...
But this I thought of,
It was stumped in my head,
Was it all my fault?
All the pain he has shed? ..
Guilt trapped my mind,
As I choked out my pride,
With a sorry so soft,
I run back to hide...
Then silence broke,
And darkness prevailed,
Alone there I was,
Untrusted, unveiled...
I forged my own words,
so faux and so fake,
I tried to be careful,
with what drama I'd make..
I might make things worse,
if I blemish or slip,
With this burden I hold,
I blunder, I trip..
No options left here,
but to face it with fear,
Untrusted, Unveiled,
no statement was clear...
I tried to comprehend,
But it was no use,
Untrusted, unveiled,
No sense left to muse..
If this were a dramatic monologue presented to a large audience, I believe you'd get a standing ovation. A great write..I think this one would become famous someday..thinking and dancing with the shadows, confusion and darkness..read the poem and you'll have nothing more to say. I look forward to more of your poems. -grins-
A true contemplation seems to have been disturbed by some distressing act that has covered the senses with pelts of fear...........
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nice poem... greatly done.. strong dark emotions... but focus on positive things ok? ? =)