Bedazzled By Just One Stare Poem by Nashy Lamen

Bedazzled By Just One Stare

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It started with a single touch,
And into your eyes I'd stare,
I think I stared a little too much,
That I felt a feeling I could not compare,

Then I felt a sudden rush,
I just stared more and more,
A feeling of a sudden gush,
So hard to not ignore.

I smiled at you and you smiled back,
My smile I can never erase,
Your eyes and mine are so intact,
A thought of you in my head,
I can never replace.

My heart it jumped, tremendously,
That it was so intricate to stop,
A massive effect it had on me,
My sanity it slowly dropped,

My world renewed a different view,
I guess your eyes bedazzled me,
My feeling though, unknown if true,
You see confused, I maybe.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danzen D. 05 September 2009

A stare too long...the beginning of things uncomprehensible. You know what I mean, hehe. Keep writing!

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Siddharth Singh 28 August 2009

Baffling or bemusing, who cares? What matters is that you were beddazled.

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Nashy Lamen 28 August 2009

Yes people... I'm not really sure of what I felt.. It was just a stare that sparked through, though baffled I maybe by it's meaning.. It changed my mood... It was awkward really... :)

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Julia Pascual 28 August 2009

so you wre bedazzled... amazed... but you don't know if it's true? ? hmm... haha.. keep it up.. =)

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Lorena Cruz 27 August 2009

a stare that made a heart jump but with doubts on what it means... keep on rockin

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