Nashy Lamen


Despaired Forgiveness - Poem by Nashy Lamen

Enraged eyes of fire and doom,
To no extent I’ve made a sin,
To no forgiveness I broke their trust,
And I know I must regain... I must.

I have deceived and I am cursed,
I’ve tried no tries; I’ve made it worse,
My guilt has drowned me in my lies,
And now my damaged conscience cries.

So here I sit in silence, blind,
There’s no solution I can find,
I am trapped in broken glass,
As time and chances pass by fast.

I’m so sorry, so nonsense I know,
Useless, I see,
Cause I’ve done much wrong,
So tragically.

I don’t know what to do anymore,
Without you, I’m wept of my shore,
Without you guys, I’m an empty hole,
Endless, sorrows and regrets to roll.

I’ve said things that I did not intend,
Can you still try to comprehend?
Or there’s no use in my beseech,
There’s none to beg, there’s none to teach.

I’ve done my wrong, my pang of guilt,
I’ve sunken down, ensconced in filth,
To no forgiveness I broke their trust,
And I know I must regain... I must.

And now I must regain, I must.


Comments about Despaired Forgiveness by Nashy Lamen

  • (8/6/2009 8:02:00 AM)

    A spectacular poem for one so young, it was a pleasure to read, well done,
    10
    Lynda xx
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  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (8/5/2009 9:32:00 AM)

    Wow your so young but with big talent.Nice poem.Keep writing dear. (Report)Reply

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  • (8/5/2009 8:57:00 AM)

    people who seek forgiveness shall be forgiven if the apology is sincere... if something is given from the heart, it shall be accepted also from the heart (Report)Reply

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  • Louis Rams (8/4/2009 4:54:00 PM)

    forgiveness lies in a persons heart, you've made the first step by realizing and
    forgiving yourself, and the next step is showing your true feelings to others.
    and if it is your parents that you're asking for forgiveness, we as parents
    will always forgive.
    this is a very beautiful poem and heart touching, and your parents would be proud.

    keep writing your poetry, for you are good. a ten
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  • (8/4/2009 12:44:00 PM)

    I liked the format of your w rite. Uniform verse with good feel and flow. Lastly...'Many knew thier mistakes, but only few have that courage to correct their past deeds' so 'many knew, few act'. Wonderful write to ponder. (Report)Reply

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  • (8/4/2009 9:02:00 AM)

    to err is human, to forgive divine....u ve expressed very well..good work natasha (Report)Reply

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  • (8/4/2009 8:38:00 AM)

    Nice choice of words...good flow and rythm..and great message. Know what, you're poems are very unique in a way that (in my opinion) whenever I read the words, I can hear a faint voice and a silhouette of a lass in a stage speaking it..loud and clear..with the lights coordinating with the actions. And somehow, every time I read a composition of yours, in the end, I stand, clapping and open-mouthed. ^_^ (Report)Reply

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  • (8/4/2009 6:45:00 AM)

    trust is hard to get but when lost it's the hardest to regain... nice one nash.. you've grown a lot in making poems...
    (i don't mean anything about that ok)
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  • (8/3/2009 8:07:00 AM)

    nice simile
    ''I am trapped in broken glass,
    As time and chances pass by fast.''
    wonderful poem..........
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  • Ency Bearis (8/3/2009 7:51:00 AM)

    a remarkable verses...the thoughts of regrets and to forgive is clearly sincere of good intention..well versed and well penned...a good poem to ponder.....10 (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 3, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 22, 2011


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