Ursula's Fantasy. Poem by Fay Slimm

Ursula's Fantasy.

Rating: 5.0


Her fingers stretched out to touch his dark hair.
His boyish frame, covered as he slept there.
He lay in the bed she had used when a lass.
His ankle now healed - but when would this pass?

This longing for love which surged through her soul.
She had, for so long, been living alone.
Her sweetheart had gone in the great World War.
Those years ago, she had known love before.

She fancied he looked like her lost young man,
And slowly her mind had hatched a bold plan.
She would not report him washed up on shore.
Life need not be again as it was before.

Her white hair she could dye, and buy new clothes,
Put on some lipstick, paint fingers and toes.
These fantasies raged in her head at night.
He would come to love her if she looked right.

But, seeing him there, in his flush of youth,
Her eyes swam with tears as she faced the truth.
So far was the distance between their birth.
Her impossible dream had no real worth.

Except to imagine what might have been
If he had been lonely, and she, seventeen.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Goge 24 October 2009

Remarkable but sad history... You write beautifully and talently dear Fay, / For some reason for Ursula I have recollected the novel 'hundred years of loneliness' / 10.... Best wishes, Tsira

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Carol Gall 24 October 2009

poignant and so lovely fay 10

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 07 November 2009

Sadly, I dont get the time to read much these days, but when I do, I make for your beautiful work everytime fay, just wonderful... Andy 10

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Chuck Audette 27 October 2009

Imaginative tale! Is there a time machine or anti-aging potion involved? -chuck

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Georgia Girl 26 October 2009

Fay this is amazing, it brought a smile with a hint of sadness, somewhat humorous while also sympathetic...awesome work! ! 10

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Sandra Martyres 25 October 2009

Your poetic talent is so visble in this very poignant but beautiful poem Fay..You have explained Ursula's fantasy with such finesse - brings a tear to my eye...10++++

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Bob Gibson 24 October 2009

Cheated from love by a world gone mad has left a young girl incredibly sad pinning away for a love long gone seems an old familiar song

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