Tribhawan Kaul

Bronze Star - 2,733 Points (01-01-1946 / Srinagar (J & K) India)

Valentine Day - Poem by Tribhawan Kaul

You offer me
Sans thorns.
Propose me!
Why should I accept?
Yes, I do love you
And you love me too
I know
Tide is changing
I propose you
Will you accept my rose?
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Comments about Valentine Day by Tribhawan Kaul

  • Shahzia Batool (2/25/2014 11:55:00 PM)

    A poem with an unexpected but realistic turn...! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Geetha Jayakumar (2/25/2014 2:54:00 PM)

    A beautiful Valentine proposal. Definitely one will accept rose with thorns only, for life is a combination of pain and joy. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Wahab Abdul (2/25/2014 10:39:00 AM)

    without thorns there are no cute a poem. (Report) Reply

  • (2/25/2014 3:42:00 AM)

    accept love, notwithstanding its pitfalls...very touching. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 14, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, February 14, 2014

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