Valueless Coins Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Valueless Coins

Rating: 5.0


Some expired but some still in circulation
Children play with it, love their accumulation
Grandparents are old coins
When a lovely grandchild joins
Listen to the laughter on the revaluation.

Valueless Coins
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rini Shibu 23 June 2018

Valueless coins which once was valued..Great poem with deep meaning

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Robert Murray Smith 23 June 2018

A great poem. In Australia, one cents and two cents have gone. What about Argentina? ++10

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Kelly Kurt 23 June 2018

Some countries/cultures do not appreciate their elders as much as others.

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Red Soul 29 June 2018

We have gradually being losing our humanity, proven explicitly in the way we treat our elders. I wish these people knew the value of family better. A wonderful poem Mr Jawad. Have a nice afternoon: -)

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 June 2018

really this is heart touching poems touchstone 10+++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 June 2018

This poem resonates with me. Sometimes it is fun of collecting old coins as a hobby. Old coin carries history. Children will be informed of the value of money and the important events and public figures engraved in the coin. A great piece well crafted.10

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Khalida Bano Ali 23 June 2018

A heart touching poem, being a grandmother, I can understand it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 June 2018

Once upon a time coin was full of value but as per change of time time it is valueless. The laughter of the revaluation still grandchildren feel seeing wonderful and pretty coins. These coins are important pasts of memory and some are in circulation. A great philosophical and perceptional poem is presented nicely....10

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