Venus View (Embodies Love And Beauty) Poem by Xelam Kan™

Venus View (Embodies Love And Beauty)

Rating: 4.0


Late in the winter eve,
when a sight is hazed by mist
And the Maple leaves crack with steps
And chirping crickets are well perceived.

Above in the western zone
she reigns the darkness alone
Far from the maddening crowd*
Bright, glittering and a Nature`s pride.

From dusk to darkling dawn,
Catching the wandering eyes
Of the waning soul, that silently cries
and crave for hours those, already gone.

Abode in you, O bright star!
Treasure of poetic 'Form and conceits'
Sweet and charming and stirring the beats
A melancholy too that never retreats.

Inscribe on my unwritten soul
O goddess of love and grace:
-In bitterness she breathed life her whole-

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Xelam Kan™ 25 November 2012

Many a times i was turned hypnotized by this gorgeous reflection of sweet Nature,

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Unwritten Soul 25 November 2012

Winter eve clouds...and the stars above it (can withstand cold) ...wow how that nature really hypnotized us with the spirit and gorgeousness..Absolutely a nice and detailed poem...a poem that every reader should cheer of...but what's the weird is the using of venus name..we are all Earth-ians right hahaha and well use of unwritten soul term there_Soul

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Bright Morn 25 November 2012

An excellent poem, loved the way u described the eve, And the Maple leaves crack with steps, simple but poetic, i liked the changing rhyme, sweet and melodious.very very very nice, Thanks for sharing

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Valerie Dohren 25 November 2012

A lovely tribute to Venus, a truly beautiful planet to see in the night sky.

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 27 November 2012

A wonderful tribute to Venus. the poetic perception extremely beautiful. Very romantic and outstanding rhythm.

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Asif Andalib 27 November 2012

Beautiful write Sir. Unwritten soul is an outstanding personality. I also like her a lot and feel her pain.

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Shahzia Batool 26 November 2012

Many games of art you have played here: painted a picture with images, made it a literary piece, and dedicated the poem to the lively unwritten soul... thanks for inviting me to read it...

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Jahan Zeb 26 November 2012

Into Romanticism at last Gulsher. detached and distant in approach. I love the reading of this piece of yours. Growing rapidly. / \ / \ / \ / \ / \ / \ / \ / \ / \ / \ / \ / lovely rhythm. You jumbled the rhyming but it worked. Fantastic.

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It is a worthful praise on the incarnate beauty VENUS.. The inner charm of poetic perception of her beauty excels the outer charm of your expression. Kudos to you Mr Gulsher

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