Verses Written At "Coral Sunset" Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Verses Written At "Coral Sunset"

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You have lost your way in your searching
For romance, tenderness, and affection;
And, you have found her: there in the orchestra,
Playing Mozart with her violin, while dreaming of you:
Butterflies were taking flight from her strings,
Fluttering secret dreams on their wings:
There, on her strings, with every breath and note,
There was a sight, a shiver, a sigh, a rest…

Unleashing your heart wide-open to dreaming
Fantasies, wildly spreading in the back of your mind:
You have been expecting all your life these moments
Of liberation, of freedom to new dimensions;
You have accompanied her and her orchestra
Through the world at every concerto:
You have been her muse, her inspiration:
Her love for you, loudly to the word exposed.

The secret loud-sung, vibrating on her violin,
It is the extension of her heart trembling on strings,
And you, the spectator of your intimate romance:
A romance publicly declared, mysteriously, in secrecy
Rousing and arousing your emotions in exaltation:
Flames of passion were burning around your heart!
The stage was beckoning with fire: calling you,
Pulsing, pumping, and inciting every beat of your heart!

With each note, with each movement of her violin bow
Sliding squeaky and sweet on strings with madness:
An orchestra playing with your heart: only for your heart!
What secret message did your mind discern
Among the crowd, that the crowd couldn't comprehend?
The indulgence of your being in you being
‘Against the nature, ' forgetting your nature,
Melting in femininity, devouring lips: tongues and kisses…

Wednesday, October 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: womanhood,lady,love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 20 November 2015

Surfing Tsunami Waves exquisite passions stir rising on wave birth stirred tsunami waves pulse oceanic ripple thought heartbeats cascade love is liquid intensity ardent passion rides Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Coral Sunset Diana' by Mihaela Pirjol. Dedicated to the poet Mihaela Pirjol.

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Terry Craddock 14 October 2015

exquisite, stirred tsunami waves of thought, loved the intensity, the ardent passion of the ride 10+++

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M Asim Nehal 10 October 2015

I liked the imagery in your poem and the drops of honey in each lines.... The indulgence of your being in your being Against the nature, forgetting your nature; Melting in femininity, devouring lips, tongues and kisses.....SUPERB, short of adjectives to admire this piece...100 on 10.

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