Visibility Poem by chandra thiagarajan

Visibility

Rating: 5.0


A dot
On a pure white apparel
Is instantly visible to the eye.
Like-wise
A wrong thought
On the mind’s apparel
Should immediately be visible to me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 13 August 2013

From all your writings, it is very apparent that you want to keep your mind' s apparel spotlessly white! Simple and cute with a great message!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 12 August 2013

Mind’s apparel is always white. Wrong thoughts keep darkening it. Beautiful poem.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 12 August 2013

very simply written, but it has a very deep meaning with very strong message and warning awesome..! ! !

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R.j. Wynn 12 August 2013

Awesome, and I thank you for sharing.

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Geetha Jayakumar 12 August 2013

Beautiful poem with deep meaning in it...I too agree with both the comments below...Loved reading it.

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Om Chawla 30 August 2013

Truly a wrong thought is usually 'visible' on mind's eye, but do all of us take notice of it and if so how many times.

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Ramesh Rai 21 August 2013

mind is the face of a person.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 13 August 2013

Good intention and more than 95% of the population openly declare this statement..Nice to read, CT..

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 13 August 2013

Good intention and more than 95% of the population openly declare this statement..Nice to read, CT..

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Aswath Raman 13 August 2013

And let's hope! The dot is not on a blind spot! Really sesnible write ma'am!

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