survi sharma

Voice Of A Rapist - Poem by survi sharma

O fair lady
where are you going
don't you know
it is going to be twelve
though you are wondering
are you not afraid of the rapists
who just play with your skin
and give you just a life long pain

Comments about Voice Of A Rapist by survi sharma

  • Kinjal Sharma (8/8/2013 3:24:00 AM)

    rapist must be hanged
    a great message delivered poet
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  • Indranil Bhaduri (6/22/2013 3:25:00 AM)

    Superb expression.. so meaningful and relevant. Great job. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Seale (6/20/2013 11:44:00 PM)

    wicked men, seducing charm... be wary of them, that will do you harm.
    cross your legs, lock your doors... for once they take you, you're labeled whores.
    -survi, if I could protect the innocence from 3 things... it would be 1) rape and molestation,2) child abuse and neglect, and 3) prevention of suicide. Intriguing Write! Loved it! ; -) Kelly.
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  • (6/20/2013 2:37:00 AM)

    Short and sweet and again a thought provoking subject.Well done.This is probably your best work.(not to undermine the other poems they are also absolute gems) (Report) Reply

  • Ckim Mbasa (6/19/2013 10:48:00 AM)

    Haa, wat was your mood when you wrote this poem? It's a poem of its kind. Nice poetry sister. (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (6/19/2013 9:03:00 AM)

    One dreams of a world where one can move freely anywhere any time. (Report) Reply

  • Kavya . (6/19/2013 4:46:00 AM)

    good one but this is the reality of woman.....not safe at all times (Report) Reply

  • (6/19/2013 1:28:00 AM) sm how shows d conditn of indian women...!
    Nice idea...
    Requst u 2 read my poemdamini a soul...
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  • Shreya Nair (6/18/2013 9:47:00 PM)

    true.. very true. they kill your soul.. nice work (Report) Reply

  • Farah Ilyas (6/18/2013 5:17:00 AM)

    probably the words of rapist....nice work great job (Report) Reply

  • (6/17/2013 10:20:00 PM)

    I like it sister, very revealing. (Report) Reply

  • Vineet Chhikara (6/17/2013 4:39:00 AM)

    is rapist saying this all... i mean rapists dont do much talking.... (Report) Reply

  • Somaye Sadeghi (6/17/2013 12:54:00 AM)

    it's tragedy
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  • Vishal Sharma (6/16/2013 11:29:00 PM)

    it is certainly the voice of a rapist
    it is how he lures women
    amazing creation and brillent concept.
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  • Nasarudheen Parameswaran (6/16/2013 10:18:00 PM)

    The inner sense is good and its form interesting.Though a usual question, we must remember that Keechaka (he who was killed by Bhimasena) and DevendraRaja of Devas) are awaiting to embrace girls.Be vigilant.Don't be trapped in attractive offers or words.Life is personal.Share only when you are independent and with one quite sure of partner's.integrity, Never go alone for parties or fine excuses to avoid such lonely situations.Self protections is the best protection, Try to reach home or hostel before long in night or be with other people at the Waiting room of the railway/bus stand.Avoid isolation that lure rapists. I feel it would be good to keep on certain limited number of syllable to maintain rhythm.May be ascending or in descending order.. Our spirit and emotional stress decides such factors..Observe Nature, read Puranas and history to find similarities for simile/metaphorical uses. I expect good poems from you further.Go on writing and editing and publishing.My God bless you. (Report) Reply

  • Poetheart Morgan (6/16/2013 8:52:00 PM)

    Keep written poetess! ! ! ! You are a voice! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Aaron Lynn (6/16/2013 7:20:00 PM)

    Short and bitter. I enjoyed reading it, you appear to have some potential :) (Report) Reply

  • David Wood (6/16/2013 2:35:00 PM)

    Short and sweet. There is no need to use many words. (Report) Reply

  • (6/16/2013 1:24:00 PM)

    nice and simple.hope u will improve more as poetess (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 16, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 30, 2013

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