Voice Of Fear Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN
Voice Of Fear
When I'm here under a cloud;
I hear a strange voice aloud
That makes me to wander around
Nothing but a high pitched sound
That I feel in my heart like a threat
That dripping my mind with sweat
To cogitate me sitting on this sand
As like I'm trapped in a fairy land
Where I hear the shrill in my ears
Of a man who's been admist fears
And also hear the growl of a hound
That trying to bring his mind round
I think I'm lost all alone in a maze,
And my mind going through a daze,
Here my life feels everything as strange
As I'm bound by woes beyond range
Nor can I walk here in this desert or run
For I'm not seeing an azure sky and a sun
But much have I learned from my choices
Now I can relate to all the fiendish voices,
When I see a path in my eldritch screech
That there's a God, to Him I can beseech
And He will lead me to the shore of mirth,
Eventhough I'm living down on this earth
it's a good n well-composed poem...a consistent imagery is built up throughout...good job...
From the maze of life, God can lead us to the shore of mirth....! .. A great poem...... resonant and alliterative....Vipins... you are really talented! !
And He will lead me to the shore of mirth, .......................each day is a lesson indeed guided by HIM.............. :) well put in poetic words...
This poem echoes fear of not only your heart Vipins everyone's heart including mine! The way you rhyme and rhythm i can see sweet lyricist in you with added word power! When I see a path in my eldritch screech That there's a God, to Him I can beseech With these lines and many more, you have the power to impress anyone! 100/100!
Sometimes life can feel like a puzzle wrapped inside an enigma... But the joy of life is solving the puzzle... Very nice poem...
Another very beutiful poem. The wisdom in the closing verses makes a wonderful end for this poem. Keep it up, Vipins. Very well written.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/23/2024 9:59:23 PM # 1.0.0.1119
A really beautiful poem, really like this my friend. A fantastic write.